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You are angst poetry played on the strings of an untuned guitar A smokers cough cord that grinds like grit in a turbine Clumsy fingers that slip ungracefully on the flimsy stretched nylon A coffee percolating flow of words I do not know A language of sophisticated agony the core of your existence is wretched from your gut through the microphone when my sense are filled with the crudity of your song, I can feel the pain, more than words, you are the poetry that you perform

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Date: 7/9/2018 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations! You deserved the win.
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Date: 7/1/2018 3:53:00 PM
Strong imagery in your poem, Casarah - congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/30/2018 6:23:00 PM
Hi Casarah, a deep and raw write that is well worth the read. The emotion of poetry. A wonderful write Casarah. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 6/30/2018 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this thought-provoking poem. :)
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Date: 6/30/2018 4:17:00 PM
For sure it is not about disecting the chant of the heart but the emotions that wrote the words.
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Date: 6/30/2018 3:46:00 PM
Awesome Cas
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Date: 6/30/2018 12:22:00 PM
Beautifully emotive. Congrats.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/30/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/30/2018 10:38:00 AM
Brilliant.. a fav because it's perfectly raw, yet can be felt by anyone. I wish you'd add notes cause I want more of your mind girl.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/30/2018 2:16:00 PM
Well thank you, I'll make a mental note to add notes to my writes, if you can handle the crazy workings of my mind that is.. muhaha... lol
Date: 6/30/2018 10:14:00 AM
deep and meaningful.. enjoyed reading hug Eve
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/30/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank you :)

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