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waves to me in wind leaves flagging spring’s fast defeat summer’s shady win. May 8, 2016 Short Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/17/2016 6:52:00 AM
very nice use of words, Rita, excellent haiku.
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Date: 5/15/2016 2:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/15/2016 5:28:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Rita - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/14/2016 6:15:00 PM
I liked that play on words in the last line, Rita. A cute KU. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/11/2016 6:12:00 AM
Deep but lovely...thanks for sharing your mind
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Date: 5/9/2016 2:04:00 PM
nicely penned Rita.
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 5/9/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/8/2016 3:28:00 PM
Lovely haiku Rita good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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