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Poetry Is a Baby Bird Hatching

Growing too big for the egg It pushes out With all its strength and might So naive of the outside world Yet so determined to push through the shell And leave its comfort zone To see new world Scribbles, tinkles, sprinkles, twinkle twinkle Innocent eyes see the light The feathers make little moves The legs straighten out The beak toughen Making little sounds Songs of freedom, songs of new dawn, songs of flight Mama bird guides it through Feeding styles Hunting tactics Feelings of depthness Staying active Lessons of, reasons to, seasons for It heeds the advice It follows its instincts And lets the words flow Far beyond the paper Like a baby bird Growing and flying higher

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Date: 3/28/2016 9:19:00 AM
I relate to this a in real way Nice piece.
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Date: 12/5/2015 8:51:00 AM
What a lovely poem! Spectacular and mind romancing. A 7 and an excellent share
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/20/2015 6:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Funom. I appreciate the Visit
Date: 12/2/2015 6:22:00 PM
A very interesting way to compare to poets! cute idea. I enjoyed this.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/3/2015 2:56:00 PM
thank you Andrea :-)
Date: 12/1/2015 5:33:00 PM
Hello njeri... nicely done njeri, entwining a poem with a hatchling. Both are interesting battles before fine results - Lindsay
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/3/2015 2:54:00 PM
very true. thank you Lindsay.

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