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I relinquish my pen before the storm of her tears falling upon my bare arm her gentle whispering breathed in my ear Muse of mine, adieu to your wit and charm With piqued reasons I have come to deduce It's time to say fond farewell to my muse She should seek a new poet and lay claim for my words have grown utterly abstruse Spare me sullen eyes, from cries in refrain I shall not weep in sadness nor disdain Bitterness does not become a recluse My poet's heart weakens, I dare not feign Time's drawn the shades in darkness of night No candle flame shall glimmer enough light in which I may be tempted before morn to doubt seclusion and attempt to write Cloistered without pen, I shall ever be From thinking in rhyme I shall be set free Poems half written on bits of scrap paper I shall lock away and then toss the key My hand has retired, this last poem now penned No more idyll thoughts of mind will transcend Bereft of rhymes and abandoned of verse This poet knows her time has reached an end Ink no longer flows through my tunneled veins Expressed emotions in poetry wanes And when interred, on my stone I shall read, "Reclusive poet" over my remains

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Rowe Weiss

Date: 1/26/2024 12:11:00 PM

Despite your "artist block" claim, you still write so beautifully. Imagine if you're inspired. Unfortunately, creative juices flow more when we are sad, heartbroken and or forlorn.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/26/2024 12:42:00 PM

That's the absolute truth. Our hearts are willing to lay themselves bare when they are on the verge of breaking. Thanks for reading me. There was no artist block... I'm never at a loss for lack of an imagination.

John Gondolf

Date: 1/18/2024 6:55:00 PM

Congrats your podium placement, Lin. I can really relate to the words of your poem, it seems that I have lost some of the fire I had for writing. John

Lin Lane
Date: 1/18/2024 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, John but get that spark back… soon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2024 1:23:00 PM

wow, way to go, Lin. BIG congrats on a podium win.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/18/2024 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Julia Ward

Date: 1/18/2024 10:17:00 AM

A thoughtful poem deserving of the high win in my contest, "Most Viewed", Lin. Well done!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/18/2024 1:31:00 PM

Thank you for finding it deserving, Julia.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/14/2023 7:41:00 AM

Dear Lin, it's a joy for me to return to re-read your exquisite poem.. the one that kickstarted our side-by-side marathon run :) Congratulations for your excellent win in Ink Empress's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/14/2023 9:08:00 AM

oh, how wonderful for you and for your granddaughters.. precious time spent on making cherished memories

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2023 8:27:00 AM

Hi Susan, Thank you. I knew I'd entered it in Mark's marathon but not that it was the first. Although it has received more views than any other of my poems, it's not my favorite. I appreciate your congratulations and did notice you were high on the winner's list, but I haven't yet written my congrats to the other winners. I will rectify that today... hopefully. I've been babysitting my granddaughters... no complaints about that!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2023 8:27:00 AM

Dear Lin lane, this poem resonates with me on so many levels, sometimes i feel this way and you’ve expressed in such an eloquent manner with flawless word weaving and with so many moving lines that truly would touch any readers soul. Personally i felt like this poem defines me. Thank you for your support. Congratulations on your well deserved win

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2023 3:11:00 AM

Thank you, Ink, not just for a placement in your contest but also for your kind thoughts in relation to your feelings on what my poems expresses.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 10/12/2023 8:00:00 AM

Such a beautiful read! Excellent.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/12/2023 9:58:00 AM

You've found my most read creation. Again, thank you for the compliments you've left for me.

Kim Stone

Date: 10/5/2023 4:15:00 AM

Hopefully you will continue to write past the loss of your muse. Only the world will lose. If you forget the rhymes in your mind.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2023 3:17:00 AM

I hope you’re still enjoying the site. Your work sounds wonderfully fulfilling.

Kim Stone
Date: 10/6/2023 4:02:00 AM

Lin I am new to this site and have not had any bad experiences so far. I write and illustrate for children often and tend to think very literally.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/5/2023 4:45:00 AM

Hi Kim. What a very nice comment you’ve left for me. Thank you. It wasn’t a muse that I lost. It was respect for a few poets on the site who enjoyed bullying others. I returned because they left, but recently have returned. It’s a poetry site.. not a place for childish behavior.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/26/2022 11:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 7/27/2022 7:09:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paghunda.

John Watt

Date: 7/26/2022 9:21:00 PM

Lin, so many remarkable phrases in this last write of the recluse (so glad it is fictional): "with piqued reasons", "time's drawn the shades in darkness", "idyll thoughts of mind", "ink no longer flows through my tunneled veins", "cloistered without pen" are favorites, but the quality and intensity remains steady through the entire piece. Amazing from start to finish, a fav for me. Congrats on your winning placement! I echo Susan's hope that you will continue to enter the marathon. More opportunities for people to experience and appreciate your fabulous poetry ~ John

Lin Lane
Date: 7/27/2022 7:09:00 AM

Hi there, John. This is an oldie, and I'm happy that you've read it and left so many wonderful comments in support of my poem. I've always appreciated your visits. I've written for the current mile and will give thought to continuing to run the race. It's not a chore, since we can enter previously written poetry. So, what's to lose? You and Susan make terrific cheerleaders! Thanks for your encouragement and good luck to you in the marathon.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/20/2022 11:35:00 PM

I do think once the poetry bug bites it is in the blood forever. I would hate to see you stop writing Lin. This winning poem is amazing. Congratulations on your podium win. Blessings xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 7/22/2022 5:17:00 AM

It's definitely in the blood, Connie. I couldn't throw away my pen if I tried. Thank you for your congratulations.

Valsa George

Date: 7/20/2022 9:19:00 PM

The hands that penned this moving verse can never retire ! Lin, it is not yet time to reliquish your pen ! Though you take this poem as your swan song, we don't consider it so ! Keep penning beautiful songs ! Much enjoyed and Congratulations on your prestigious win!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/22/2022 5:16:00 AM

No swan song for me yet, Valsa. Thanks for your sincere interest.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 8:09:00 PM

"Cloistered without pen" - One could imagine the situation. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/22/2022 5:15:00 AM

Thank you, Chris. It would be an awfully sad experience.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/20/2022 7:52:00 PM

Dear Lin, how very sad it would be if you were forevermore “cloistered without pen / bereft of rhymes and abandoned of verse”. What a loss it would be for all who embrace breathtaking poetry. Your amazing intellect and stunning artistry is framed perfectly within the beauty of the rubaiyat. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. It’s wonderful to share the podium with you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 7/21/2022 10:10:00 AM

I am humbled and honored by your beautiful thoughts, Lin. I don’t think it’s too late to join in the race. There are so many more “miles” to go and no one has a lock on it. Though you would be a gifted and highly accomplished opponent in the contests, very stiff competition indeed, I would relish the poetic experience and the camaraderie of “running the race” with you.. please reconsider, my friend

Lin Lane
Date: 7/20/2022 7:57:00 PM

Hi, Susan. Your delectable comments have not lost a bit of their sincere eloquence. I am very grateful for the gracious kudos you've given my poetry. Coming from the hand of a master poem weaver, I take your words as the epitome of praise. Thank you ever so much for them. I've just become aware of the marathon, but I think I've dallied too long before entering. If you needed luck to run the miles I'd offer it, but I've no doubt you've no need for luck.

Mark Toney

Date: 7/20/2022 4:49:00 PM

Wow, Lin! The poet recluse does refuse her muse! "Muse of mine, adieu to your wit and charm ... she should seek a new poet and lay claim ..." Your rubaiyat is fascinating and brilliantly written. A Fave for me. Congratulations on your podium finish on Mile 8 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 9 has already started!

Mark Toney
Date: 7/22/2022 10:33:00 AM

It’s interesting to note, in my 2019 Poetry Marathon, there was one poet who didn't place until Mile 16. That poet had only 5 placements in the entire 2019 Poetry Marathon, but still placed in the top 15 at the finish line!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/20/2022 7:48:00 PM

I appreciate you giving credit to my Rubaiyat with your encouraging comments, Mark. I'm afraid I've arrived too late to the party.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/16/2022 11:31:00 PM

Reading from the top 100 list. found this poem of yours that touched my soul. Glad it was for a contest. Glad you've written more so I could meet you and read your poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 7/17/2022 5:23:00 AM

Thank you for reading more of my poetry, Bill. Your comments are appreciated.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/30/2019 1:39:00 PM

Hello Lin Lang, yes this poem is from the heart you created. Sometimes it is hard to create a oem when our muse runs dry. i hope you get first place with this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/12/2020 5:24:00 AM

Thank you very much, Darlene. The judge thought it only good enough for the winner's list, but not 1st place.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/9/2019 1:07:00 AM

It's fascinating to me the phases we "sensitive" types go through - one day creating at a fevered pitch, the next at our wits end, (and too ragged from our soul-scraping efforts to e'er consider more) ... this speaks to something most of us go through, I think, and In such a powerful way - superb write! I miss your positive presence here, Lin, (though I've nearly left a dozen times since you left). I pray you are finding success and joy at AllPoetry, and that life is blessing you in all ways.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/12/2020 5:21:00 AM

I'm revisiting my older poems and just now seeing several comments. Many thanks for your glowing thoughts, Greg.