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Pluto's Treasure

Golden objects are most outstanding, But without loving, they are missing flavor. But let’s not forget stunning silver, That the maid often loves to savor. And brilliant copper, with its rosy sheen, That every craftsman should well know. But cold iron, as Kipling likes to say, From all of these, takes the show. Not mentioned yet, but not to be overlooked, Is platinum, our bright and lustrous pal. Thought to be impure for thousands of years, But now more valuable than them all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 1/13/2024 9:41:00 AM
Nice poem, Albert.
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Date: 8/28/2022 7:18:00 AM
Dear Albert, your poem is a delight with wonderfully textured imagery and shine. I especially admire; "But let’s not forget stunning silver, / That the maid often loves to savor." - such a great visual formed in my imagination. Congrats for having this piece featured on this week's home page. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/28/2022 9:28:00 PM
Thank you much.
Date: 3/26/2016 7:53:00 AM
I like the way the minerals were showcased, giving each their own luster. Well done!
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Date: 3/22/2016 11:22:00 AM
A gem of a poem, Albert. My dad was a jeweler and I love to take pokes at shiny stuff. Congrats, daver
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:27:00 PM
ALBERT,, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:17:00 PM
Albert, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:27:00 PM
3 TIMES THIS YEAR
Date: 7/11/2015 3:05:00 AM
ALBERT:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:43:00 AM
Hi Albert : A great poetic description on the minerals. you certainly gave them personalities.
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Date: 5/3/2015 8:53:00 PM
Albert, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 5/3/2015 7:58:00 PM
Albert, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 9/10/2008 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Albert. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2008 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 9/9/2008 8:41:00 AM
One man's trash is another man's treasure. I liked this. Congratulations on it being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/8/2008 3:50:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/8/2008 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations Albert on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/8/2008 4:49:00 AM
Very interesting observation - congrats on being featured this week
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