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I see you there weaving in and out of shadows flickering like the moon obscured by thick clouds hoovering overhead as the incandescence light of a new dawn breaks in crimson streaks across this sky I feel your breath brushing against my ivory flesh in labored sighs like a storm's rise of quickened gusts and i quiver within the cold of fear and death your name falls in whispers behind the masks of silenced lips who care not to speak of your wrath from bended knees my hands reach out in pleas of prayers hoping to see an end to this world's despair many join together their songs of praise in hopes to see a flicker of light break through the duskiness of this unmerciful plague swirling around them alone they feel defeated together they feel strength in one certain belief 'Roses from all nations scintillate in complete harmony' March 17,2020 Poetic lines contest sponsored by Silent One ending line credit ….'Roses from all nations scintillate in complete harmony' A Rose by any other Name - by Maria Williams

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Date: 3/31/2020 10:42:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... presented in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 3/26/2020 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Guess no one would have believed a little virus could close down the world. It is all so sad. Stay safe................
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Date: 3/25/2020 11:03:00 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/26/2020 8:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve...I hope all is well in your corner of the world my friend... hugs and blessings
Date: 3/25/2020 2:52:00 PM
- So glad I found this on the winning list ... it's a wonderful poem, Sandra :) - Congratulations, my friend :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2020 8:57:00 AM
thank you so much Anne-Lise… I am trying my best... you stay safe as well... hugs and blessings!
Date: 3/25/2020 12:46:00 PM
Sandra, the usual power of your poetic skills is multiplied with the power of global unity and harmony. Your quote from Maria's opus was so nicely built towards with an arc of cold gloom and anxiety into music, light, and oneness. Beautifully done! Congrats on the #1. Hugs/John
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Date: 3/25/2020 12:47:00 PM
thank you so very much John....when I first set out to write for the contest, I had one of the other lines in mind, but my muse started this journey so I chose a different line... hugs
Date: 3/25/2020 7:30:00 AM
Congrats on you win in this contest my friend. I knew this one would end up at the top of the list.
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Date: 3/25/2020 12:46:00 PM
thank you so much Chris :) hugs
Date: 3/25/2020 5:40:00 AM
You took a very different take to this line and i can see how you were inspired.. this poem can been seen in different ways by the reader, not just about the virus... Congratulations on you first place in the contest..
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/25/2020 12:45:00 PM
thank you so much S.O. I am honored to be among the winner's :) hugs!
Date: 3/18/2020 11:57:00 AM
Dramatically descriptive piece, Sandra. Janice
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/18/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice :) hugs
Date: 3/18/2020 7:53:00 AM
Outstanding poem synchronized perfectly with the needs of time dearest, Sandra. Hugs xxx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/18/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios... stay safe my friend... hugs and blessings... XoXo :)
Date: 3/17/2020 10:54:00 PM
Wow this is spectacular Sandy! You and your muse are riding high. I loved this look at the darkness that looms in our shadows, never knowing when it will pounce. Excellent my friend! Happy St. Patty's Day. xxoo
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Date: 3/18/2020 6:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie...my muse has been hiding but I guess this virus is consuming my thoughts at the moment... hugs and blessings... stay safe... XoXo
Date: 3/17/2020 10:44:00 PM
We are stronger together. Wonderful poem my friend. Have a great day.
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Date: 3/18/2020 6:20:00 PM
Thank you so much David... stay safe my friend... hugs
Date: 3/17/2020 10:07:00 PM
You were well inspired by Maria's line Sandra. Hopefully this virus will unite nation's, joining forces to find a cure. Stay safe. Tom
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Date: 3/18/2020 6:20:00 PM
Thank you Tom... this virus is consuming my mind, hopefully someone finds a cure and ends it soon... the usa already is trying trial vaccines on people but even with that it would be 18 months before it was available... stay safe yourself... hugs
Date: 3/17/2020 9:34:00 PM
Sandra, you have a magnificent way of writing about the virus .. I love the great feeling you created. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/17/2020 7:08:00 PM
Happy to see your avatar; though not so happy about this virus. Let's all hang in there. Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 3/17/2020 8:51:00 PM
I don't think anyone is happy about this virus but the way the numbers are rising, a. I think it was here before they thought it was, b. I think they need to test people that work around the public that have sore throats and not just reserve the test for people that they know had contact... people are slipping through the cracks and making others sick....stay safe my friend... hugs
Date: 3/17/2020 5:11:00 PM
Awesome my friend--you gave that poetic line superb meaning and adorned with your precious words--no doubt a top winner, Sandy. Glad to see you back.
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Date: 3/17/2020 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...my muse has been hiding somewhere... after reading yours today I don't stand a chance but happy she wanted to write.... good to see you... stay safe... hugs and blessings
Date: 3/17/2020 4:56:00 PM
Creative expression of the threat that sweeps the world. Great use of the line given.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/17/2020 6:29:00 PM
thank you so much Juliet... hugs
Date: 3/17/2020 2:21:00 PM
This was beautiful Sandy, you took a line and built a beautiful poem around it. Best wishes in the contest.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/17/2020 6:27:00 PM
thank you so much Chris... good to see you :) hugs

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