Pigs Sty

One would be flabbergasted by All the stink that is in the sty The pigs sure don’t care The smell in the air It’s a paradise for a fly Russell Sivey

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Date: 9/17/2017 10:37:00 PM

Loved this, for some strange reason. reminds me the song by Pink Floyd!

Date: 9/17/2017 6:57:00 PM

this is really good, Russell. If I were you, I would start last line just with IS since you already had your subject stated in line four.

Russell Sivey
Date: 9/17/2017 7:34:00 PM

Was going for syllable count there, lol.

Date: 9/17/2017 6:13:00 PM

Interesting work..Limericks are so clever..Thanks for the visits to my page..Flies do like to visit the farm animals for sure..Sara

Date: 9/17/2017 11:54:00 AM

lol, that's all i got to say,very true Russell:)

Date: 9/17/2017 9:34:00 AM

Hi Russell , very enjoyable Limerick and yes pigs don't care ::))

Date: 9/17/2017 8:12:00 AM

Good one Russell. So true :)

Date: 9/17/2017 7:47:00 AM

I don't mind it either... earthy! Must have some farmer stuff in my past!!! LOL Another limerick whiz is making his mark!!! KUDOS!!!

Date: 9/17/2017 7:47:00 AM

Very telling images of the stink and the fly--good observation and depiction, Russell!

Date: 9/17/2017 7:32:00 AM

- Smells like ... @#@# ... good that someone enjoys it :))) - Great done, Russell - Lovely sunday to you and Emma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)