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Picture Perfect

Picture Perfect
Positioning round, global meltdown Searching for that something not meant to be found Conditioned we craze, our over populated phase Why ask questions if the real issue you're scared to raise Reflexive intuition on which status or position Freedom to live our lives under certain strict conditions Egotistically incorrect, assets counted as debt Proud to be another uneducated intellect Properly addressed, to crooked to confess Wondering who is it next that I must impress Silently ashamed, only false within our fame Last ones to realize it's all just a game Shackled in restraint, lies blessed by a Saint You can't paint a perfect picture... if there is nothing perfect left to paint...
04/16/17

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Date: 4/30/2017 12:31:00 PM
Yes that is right, You can not paint a perfect picture if there is nothi6ng to paint.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/6/2017 7:27:00 AM
I am happy that you agree
Date: 4/21/2017 5:29:00 PM
Wonderful write - freedom is certainly a very subjective thing these days, yet so many are complacent with the way things are. Congrats, Brian!
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/21/2017 5:30:00 PM
You are so very right my friend, thank you
Date: 4/21/2017 2:27:00 AM
This is very good... congrats!
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/21/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thanks for reading and the nice review
Date: 4/19/2017 1:42:00 PM
You got me with your internal rhymes, well written Brian, congrats on a fine win!
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/19/2017 4:24:00 PM
Thank you very much John I am honored to place so well

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