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Personal Existence

Remnants of the past Haunting and exuding light Goals achieved with ease Dreaming seems like game Energy glows from beyond Thoughts manifest things Countless of options Make random steps to succeed Awareness goes through Happiness comes vague Exert efforts to flourish Eternal repose Exuberant mind Inward attracts the same kind Insurmountable.

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/26/2015 8:10:00 AM

I'm in awe of this profound prose My compliments! Thanks for your comment on my Being misjudged. i enjoyed your contest. It brought out the best in me.

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/18/2015 8:58:00 AM

Great Ralph thank you! Welcome as well!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2015 10:37:00 PM

philosophical 'ku!! Thought I would check out your work and glad I did!

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/24/2015 7:23:00 AM

Great thanks Andrea!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/12/2015 8:34:00 AM

These are awesome,,,,

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/24/2015 7:23:00 AM

THanks Harry!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2015 9:10:00 AM

I f I was the judge for your contest this would have scored high. Thanks for choosing my poem, much appreciated. I enjoyed reading and commenting on all the winning pieces.

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/4/2015 9:53:00 AM

Great Rich! thanks!

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/22/2015 6:35:00 AM

Very wise strings of senryu. Lovely, kabayan. Kim :-)

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 6/22/2015 6:43:00 AM

Thanks a lot Kim!