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Persimmon

love long ago departed; like persimmon buds; now, just spring flowers ever parted in afterglow of young lust. Where pink flowers did carouse soft, ripe red fruit heavy hangs on cold winters empty boughs; and so induce hunger pangs, for sweet flesh yet untasted.

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Date: 7/31/2023 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I must say, I have never had one. Have a great day.............
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/4/2023 7:21:00 AM
Hi Paula, thank you so much.
Date: 7/30/2023 7:30:00 AM
Brought back memories. Haven't had persimmons for ages. My parents had a tree. It used to get loaded. Great poem Terry. BOL in the contest.
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/4/2023 7:22:00 AM
Hi SV thank you again for your kind comments
Date: 7/30/2023 1:21:00 AM
A familiar tale ~ Enjoyed this exquisite, nostalgic write, Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/4/2023 7:22:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind comment

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