Persia

Persia, my homeland, an ancient domain a realm of poets' refrain memories of love's seasons renew Eternal springs flourish under the sun Where women are cherished, like morning dew Not to be tormented, but wrapped in loves warmth In a life of tenderness, humanity's due Let us bury evil in the sands of time In this land where stories often untold Speak of beauty, grace, and women's dreams Persia's heart, a tale to behold. Oh beautiful one your absence, my hearts death I shall whisper your sweet songs forever Dilam Barayat tang shuda

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Deb M

Date: 4/29/2024 12:54:00 PM

Incredibly beautiful Aysha! Debx

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/28/2024 9:35:00 AM

wonderful hommage, to your homeland, i have always dream to visit Iran, despite politics opinion, thanks poet

Joseph May

Date: 4/27/2024 6:33:00 PM

A great tribute to a place dear to your heart, Very nicely done

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/27/2024 4:10:00 PM

Dear Aysha, your artistic poem blending emotions, landscapes of vulnerability and strength, where beauty often emerges from the depths of pain. Thank you for sharing your soul with the world through your poetry. Blessings my friend, Daniel

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/27/2024 11:37:00 AM

An incredibly moving ode to one's native place. You brought to light the attributes of beauty, elegance, and women's hopes in this region where tales are frequently unsung, Aysha And one of the great Persian poets is Rumi. A truly moving poem!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/27/2024 4:29:00 AM

This is so very heartfelt tribute to homeland. --In this land where stories often untold Speak of beauty, grace, and women's dreams--- you brought those attribute to fore, Aysha. A meaningful poem!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/26/2024 10:03:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem. A woman has no greater happiness than to have been loved. These words spoke of deep romance. I enjoyed it's deep emotion.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2024 9:59:00 PM

I thought Persia is now Iran. Or maybe it is a region with its own traditions but not independent. Don't know much really. Your poem is wonderful. our rhymes perfect. Mine are atrocious.