Perhaps

once, i felt the sun rise in the blush of my flesh as your lips touched mine in the middle of my dreams yet wonder if it were true 02/23/2020 let the pens flow tanka contest Sponsored by Jenish Somadas

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Alexis Y.

Date: 2/26/2020 9:05:00 AM

WoW! Sandra, You composed such a good entry for the contest. Congratulations on your fine win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 6:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Alexis.... have a great evening :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/26/2020 6:59:00 AM

Bravo my friend on your contest win. This beauty sits exactly where it belongs.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 6:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris :) it was a pleasant surprise :) hugs

John Watt

Date: 2/25/2020 11:54:00 PM

Sandra, congrats in the Tanka contest for this amorous, wistful poem. Hug~ Ohn

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 5:08:00 AM

Thank you so much John. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 2/25/2020 9:51:00 PM

Congratulations!

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 5:08:00 AM

Thank you Eve :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2020 12:50:00 PM

- Returning with a smile, hugs and congratulations :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/25/2020 2:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Ann-Lise

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/25/2020 9:44:00 AM

Wonderful dream and a great win Sandra..

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/25/2020 2:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Jenish for hosting and the honor of a win :) hugs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/24/2020 2:53:00 PM

Sometimes our dreams seem so real. I'd like to think his lips did touch yours, Sandra. A beautifully penned entry for the tanka contest. Winning wishes coming your way! Hugs, Carolyn

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 7:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Carolyn... at least in dreams... hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/24/2020 11:54:00 AM

How perfectly romantic, how touching and a certain win. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 7:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Jennifer...especially for your vote of confidence :) hugs and blessings...

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/24/2020 9:42:00 AM

Super write Sandy,so full of life giving many thoughts to open the mind and final line is brings the perhaps to life. Hugs and blessings,w

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 11:11:00 AM

Thank you so much Gordon... or perhaps is does not.... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/24/2020 8:21:00 AM

I can feel the affection in this, the desire and the question it asks. Beautifully done Sandy. I just loved this little piece, it touched me deeply. This will do well in the contest.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris...I wanted it to end with that question to make the reader ponder thoughts... hugs

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/23/2020 4:45:00 PM

Love the touch of mystery on the last line, all of it intriguing-

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:57:00 PM

Thank you Michelle...I thought long and hard about the end...so it could be taken different ways from the previous line...glad to know it worked out... hugs