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Pearl Moon

Beneath the pearl moon lies the valley of shadows I'd seen her pass thru once But she was just a wish Nothing ever seemed real there And that's why I knew she was only a thought On the walks, I took in my dream state But that was the only way I knew I could survive From the things that went on in another life The landscape and the air were different there From the ruins of the mind, I passed every day But still, if I looked that way it was tattered And I could never wash that feeling off No matter how long I tried Tues. 12:30 midnight 7/4/2017

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/2/2018 2:42:00 PM

What a lovely ethereal piece! Bravo to you for sharing your golden pen with us! hugs. Pandita

Carol Mays

Date: 12/12/2017 2:29:00 PM

I love the feelings and imagery. We have to keep seeing better worlds in order to survive in this one, don't we? Beautiful expression of this need and desire.

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/21/2017 9:46:00 PM

Beautifully skilled. Something about the moom being intense and makes one pensive, feelings awake. Love this read. The imagery a wonder and the message mysterious. Very creative!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/27/2017 6:16:00 PM

I just love the atmosphere that this poem creates... A very deep and beautifully haunting write, Debbie :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/18/2017 11:25:00 AM

When you walk in a shadow remember, a shadow is cast by a Light.....

Maria Williams

Date: 7/17/2017 7:34:00 AM

Very interesting and thought provoking Debbie, I really liked the way you wound this into a brilliant finale of never being able to wash that feeling off. ..Maria

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2017 7:48:00 PM

I really like this one. It's very atmospheric. To answer your question about Monster, it was just a general statement on what lurks all over the world!

Chris Green

Date: 7/6/2017 1:58:00 PM

This is very deep and dark Debbie. I see a ghostly figure in this wonderful poem, one who tries to run from reality but it always remains. At least that I my take. Nicely done.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/6/2017 10:56:00 AM

This is a very well written poem, Debbie. A hint of melancholy:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2017 3:48:00 AM

- An interesting thought, Debbie - well written - Love the title - hugs // Anne-Lise :)