Peach Tree

Glossy glow velvet Sunripe peach tree high up Nectar beckons now Reach up high to grab the light Glossy glow of peaches grow

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 5:25:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2010 8:43:00 AM

Nice alliteration, Susan. Love that glossy glow!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2010 6:56:00 AM

I am glad that I chose this one to read this day for those fresh tree ripened Georgia peaches are one of my favorite things..You have very amply described the peach..Thanks for stopping by..SAra

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/27/2010 4:17:00 AM

Lovely Tanka, Susan ;-)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2010 3:57:00 PM

Wonderful Tanks with good images, Susan

Liz Walsh

Date: 12/26/2010 11:39:00 AM

Lovely piece - Liz

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2010 10:32:00 AM

Very peachy Susan, enjoyed the glow of your poem,..p.d.