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Patricia

I passed by your exit today I wanted to come by I miss you You are my best friend You are my pal You are a light Hadn't heard from you in a while Hadn't laughed out loud Hadn't heard you smile Why did you not call Why did you not say goodbye Why did you have to get sick I picked up my phone I put in your number I got no reply You were gone You left me alone You had died At first I didn't believe it At least someone should have called At least you are no longer suffering Wrote your parents a letter today Wrote about our friendship Wrote that I was sorry for their loss One day I might send it to them One day I might stop missing you One day I will see you again in Heaven I miss my best friend I miss my pal I miss you Patricia

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Date: 3/10/2016 1:24:00 AM
i like this Steven. LINDA
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Date: 7/7/2015 12:45:00 PM
Hi Steven, Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2015 7:11:00 AM
I love this. The thought, the inspiration, the emotion is not forced, but is just welcomed and expressed. I love the spaces in between. However, Par 3, line 2, you might want to check it again...maybe "seen" instead of "heard"? Let me know, I 'll reverse my comment. Welcome to PoetrySoup, Steven. :D Kim Patrice
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