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suite morning music surrounds one deaf man zephyrs trace my face

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Date: 9/9/2023 12:35:00 PM

A Zephyr Breeze...Breezy indeed...Arlo!!!

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/9/2023 2:24:00 PM

Face washed with wind. Eyes shut. Pax. :-)

Date: 8/25/2023 12:15:00 AM

Nice

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/25/2023 11:25:00 AM

Thanks. :-)

Date: 8/24/2023 12:50:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/24/2023 8:38:00 PM

Thanks., AD Always appreciated. :o))

Date: 8/24/2023 12:30:00 PM

Nothing like a warm soft western breeze

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/24/2023 8:37:00 PM

Just the best way to start a morning (almost!). :o)

Date: 8/24/2023 8:28:00 AM

Hello, Arlo. A fave for me. So few words, yet so powerful. “Zephyrs trace my face,” zowie.. Utterly beautiful . Pangie. This is outstanding,))))

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/24/2023 11:36:00 AM

You are too kind, P. :-)

Date: 8/23/2023 8:05:00 PM

This is a really expressive, effective senryu, Arlo! Janice

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/23/2023 11:29:00 PM

Thanks 4 your comments and visit, JC. :o)