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Past Poured Out Of me I don't know what just happened! It's not supposed to be. You asked about my past and my past poured out of me. You sat there in stunned silence at the tears I can't control. People looked in wonder at the purging of my soul. Suddenly I'm back in time abandoned by my brother. Just a frightened little boy and sleeping with my mother. He came in, he's back again I heard her tell him no. That's all it took, the whole bed shook he delivered just one blow. I hear her calling out my name with heartache in her cries. I rose up in the morning and I looked at her black eyes. Within another day or two no more childish dreams and wishes. Standing by my mothers side and drying her washed dishes. Overwhelmed by sadness first time I lost control. Long before I knew the value of the purging of my soul. They say that we get stronger from the things that we endure. They say that time will heal all wounds for me I'm not so sure. With scars inside, tears not yet cried life still takes it's toll. A brighter day tomorrow cause today I purged my soul. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 7/6/2015 3:04:00 AM
Hi Ed. Glad I saw your reply to Viv before I leave a comment. The write itself is full of raw angst, though it's not really surprising to be hit by a sudden remembrance of such things. The fluidity of the rhythm and rhyme added to the powerful images. As with most poets, something great came out of your experiences, discovering your gift. Be blessed! BTW, thank you for the honor of your invite, I'm happy with the way things are going...:-)
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Date: 7/5/2015 1:02:00 AM
Powerful write, Edwin, and I feel may be your catharsis. I think we all have episodes from our past with varying levels of pain that we dwell on, but as a pal of mine pointed out, if you spend all of your time driving a car looking in the rear view mirror, you'll keep crashing. Onwards and upwards, Viv
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:31:00 AM
I do agree. It was a momentary thing that honestly seemed to come from nowhere after being asked a simple question about my life. I was caught off guard. and my hope was that the poem would be more so about being taken by surprise by a memory more than the memory itself. I'm right back in a good place today. Thank you Viv. God bless!
Date: 7/4/2015 8:27:00 PM
Edwin I think you have too much going for you to let the past overtake you. I also think that this song belongs strictly to you. It's about how you feel about everything! Give a listen to yourself - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3nScN89Klo
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