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Passion's Lustful Cape

"Passion's Lustful Cape" Selfish motives tempted heart you threw caution to wild wind Passion's lustful cape, Choked our sweet love drape broken pieces wound for you have sinned. Selfish feelings robbed two souls carved in stone from childhood intertwine Choked our sweet love drape, Passion's lustful cape cloaked in sorrow as tears feast to dine. Selfish emotions raged on careless whispers uttered through long night Passion's lustful cape, Choked our sweet love drape smothered breath until out of sight. Selfish ways destroy persona yet you made me a stronger lady Choked our sweet love drape, Passion's lustful cape found love without Gentleman Shady. *Dec. 21, 2012 *For Su Crouse Contest.

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 3:19:00 AM

love the passion...... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2013 9:10:00 AM

Linda, my sweet bbf another nice win... , :-) Congratulations in Suzette's " ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... " contest. Take care... PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/13/2013 1:23:00 PM

Great winning work..Congrats on your top win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2013 6:46:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/12/2013 5:53:00 PM

Lovely words Linda......Seren

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2013 5:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Linda! Love, Annalise

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/12/2013 4:27:00 PM

I have to agree with Carrie...you are Poetry Soup's lady of passion...congratulations are definitely in order and I hope you are feeling better - Tim

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/12/2013 2:33:00 PM

Passion is your speciality!! Congratulations once again....hope you are doing better!

James Nichols

Date: 1/12/2013 2:06:00 PM

wow, this is like "you oughta know..." very well-done. Hell hath no fury...

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/12/2013 11:47:00 AM

It is so sad when love is betrayed. Congratulations on yur win. Hoping to hear how you are doing. Love, Joyce

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2013 11:35:00 AM

Linda-Marie~ lovely. SKAT

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/12/2013 10:33:00 AM

Passion wins most times, not always with good rewards. I really enjoyed reading your poem...well thought out. I see congrats are also in order, so Congratulations on your winning spot in the contest. Well done !!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2013 9:38:00 AM

Way to go, congratulations on well deserved win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/12/2013 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations on you winning spot Linda xx

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 1/12/2013 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your superb win in this contest,Linda-Marie..Great write...Thumb up for you,Friend...XOXO..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 7:25:00 PM

Hello, Linda my bff,, love the dodoitsu,,, thank you for the kind comment in my poem,, you are 2 sweet... xox~pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 11:03:00 PM

this is a very worthy topic to discuss in a dodoitsu such as this one, Linda. I really enjoyed reading this one especially with that stuff coming up for me in maybe 8 years. (if I still am eligible for social security stuff by then) I'm so sorry for all your problems, dear. are you asking TPS really nicely and explaining the exact problem? Do you use explorer? If so, stop it right away and change to google chrome. I had problems before using chrome. Luv, Andrea

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/13/2012 12:10:00 AM

I think this is a splendid entry into Debbie's contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this far superior and very masterfully written poem this evening! What a powerful and extremely real piece Linda-Marie, Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2012 10:22:00 PM

WE VISIT MANY SENIOR FACILITIES ESPECIALLY DURING HOLIDAY SEASON AND MANY QUESTION THOSE GOLDEN YEARS AS THEY SIT AND WAIT FOR DEATH .. SOME SICKLY BUT OTHERS SIMPLY DEPRESSED ON LIFE' OUTCOME ..SO MY THOUGHTS POETS ..LUV ..