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Passionate Touch

I oft lose my composure watching you near for love as a muse stays our passion infused. My insides are deliciously alive within delights your persona designs. Deep love still flames your ardor to ignite me in smolders scored by surrendered cries. Your calloused hands always feel like alpha plies of paradise your cravings ignite and I recall my first touch brought your raspy sigh, “Your soft slow hand feels like flitting fireflies.” ... CayCay March 18, 2020 (written for contest: credit to Soup's Maria Williams for last line, “Your soft slow hand feels like flitting fireflies,” from her poem, “Slow Hand”)

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Date: 3/25/2020 11:11:00 PM
CayCay, great written poem from the one line and a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/25/2020 2:20:00 PM
- A lovely and romantic poem, CayCay :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/25/2020 6:05:00 AM
Very softly and poetically done.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 3/20/2020 9:11:00 PM
ooh la la la. This is so sexy and wonderful, Caycay.
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Date: 3/18/2020 3:09:00 PM
Oh, those flitting firefly hands--such a contrast to his calloused mitts. :) gw
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Date: 3/18/2020 12:59:00 PM
Softly passionate CayCay, best wishes...
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Date: 3/18/2020 11:05:00 AM
you have composed a lovely write with the line choice... it flows from the heart, beautifully... stay safe my sweet friend, hugs and blessings!
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