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Parting Ways

Parting Ways On the dulled edge of day and night The faint moon rising in the sky In shadows of the fading light Along the footpath we would go, Passing the birch tree’s silver boughs Where the wild spindle berry grow. Where moss covered trees cast their shade, Where the watchful owl silent sat Night creatures stirring in the glade. Hand in hand we went on our way, As the clock ticked on darkened hours Along that path we would not stay When that approaching day was born, As the first waking song bird sang We would part on that stirring morn. 10/23/2020 For Tercet Contest by Constance La France

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Date: 11/1/2020 7:51:00 AM
Barry, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/1/2020 11:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for my win, Constance. Much appreciated. // Barry
Date: 11/1/2020 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Barry. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/1/2020 11:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve. // Barry
Date: 10/31/2020 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Barry! Linda
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/31/2020 12:37:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. // Barry
Date: 10/31/2020 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. :-)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/31/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna. // Barry
Date: 10/31/2020 11:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Barry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/31/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. // Barry
Date: 10/31/2020 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/31/2020 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Mark // Barry
Date: 10/23/2020 11:40:00 AM
Excellent poetry Barry. :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/23/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Gary // Barry

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