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Parting

Parting Now is the bleak night of our sad parting; Now the dulled hours, sharpening your absence And Memory but a poor reflecting On the past delight of your sweet fragrance. Time and chill age bring their own deceiving, Each conspiring to play a long pretence. And the shaded paths of cold reflection Will never revive your lost affection. 06/27/17 Checked with howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 7/29/2017 10:59:00 AM
Well written Barry. I am sure many can relate to this one :)
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Date: 7/7/2017 12:25:00 PM
Loss of a loved one either by breakup or death, time slowly helps to heal, yet emotional pain can be more painful than physical and that is so apparent in your lovely sad poem Barry. I hope to see this poem a top winner. : )
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/8/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Connie, I appreciate your kind words. Unfortunately it did not place in the Contest. // Barry.
Date: 7/5/2017 11:22:00 AM
Sad but lovely write, Barry! Janice
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/6/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. // Barry
Date: 7/5/2017 11:21:00 AM
Sad but lovely write, Barry! Janice
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Date: 7/4/2017 12:50:00 PM
aww made me think of 'parting is such sweet sorrow' well written but sad poem Barry:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/5/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry
Date: 6/28/2017 7:32:00 PM
Ahh..those sad goodbyes...Very nicely penned Barry
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/30/2017 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. // Barry
Date: 6/27/2017 1:28:00 PM
Nicely done, Barry. Good luck if for contest:)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/28/2017 1:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel, it is for the Contest. // Barry
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/28/2017 1:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel, it is for the Contest. // Barry

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