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Take my heart and carry me to where all dreams are born. Into loves arms, oh such a place that's always safe and warm. Away from such deceitful lairs where blackened virtues swarm. into a light where peace must shine and grants us pardon from a storm. High above the mountain tops or low as low can be. Makes no difference where we are a wondrous lyric calls to me. Singing of your splendor like a miracle performed. I'll stay with you to find the port that grants us pardon from a storm. POTD 03/03/2018

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Date: 4/16/2023 10:35:00 PM
Hi dear Smith I am hafez niknafs Composer from Iran Your lyric are so Beautiful I want use of your lyric in my composition. Can i do? I am waiting for your happy reply I mention my email for better access Hafez.niknafs@gmail.com Warm regards
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Date: 4/6/2021 2:18:00 AM
superb and lovely loving poem; greatly I enjoyed
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Date: 5/18/2021 5:47:00 PM
Thank you Mahtab...
Date: 2/29/2020 1:35:00 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, to me as I read this poem, i read it as romantic. Because he will stay with her to find the port. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/22/2021 11:00:00 AM
Thank You Darlene...
Date: 9/29/2019 10:15:00 PM
This captivation of picture and verse Charlie second to none - a very beautiful and splendid piece . . .
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Date: 5/2/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Indiana...
Date: 5/15/2019 7:01:00 AM
Awesome poem, Charlie. Congrats on your most deserving POTD. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 5/2/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thank You Line...
Date: 1/2/2019 9:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Love the accompanying picture.
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Date: 1/4/2019 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Valerie...
Date: 8/2/2018 10:20:00 AM
I loved this lyric! Well done...
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Date: 8/2/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Larry...
Date: 6/10/2018 5:13:00 AM
Wonderful my brother
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Date: 6/10/2018 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Al...
Date: 5/31/2018 11:38:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Charlie
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Date: 6/1/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Eve...
Date: 4/27/2018 9:12:00 PM
wow, how did I ever miss this one?? It's so good, Charlie and I see it got a POTD. BIG congrats for that.
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Date: 4/28/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...
Date: 4/26/2018 7:55:00 AM
This goes to my list of favorite poem, Charlie. Very beautiful, deep meaning and so heart felt by me. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 4/26/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Elaine...
Date: 4/17/2018 10:37:00 AM
It was a sheer joy to review your poem. Regards. Great work of poetry.Emoting emotion nicely done. Beauty of a poem means use of rhetorical devices. Your poem is abound with it.
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Date: 4/26/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Sanket...
Date: 4/16/2018 5:07:00 PM
I love this poem, Charlie, especially the way it reminds us that having someone to share the ups and downs of life is like a "port in the storm." Ah, how sweet it was to feel this way! (And the painting above the poem is magically linked to it. So beautiful!)
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Date: 4/26/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn..
Date: 3/29/2018 10:10:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Charlie. Love it and a belated congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 3/30/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Carole...
Date: 3/27/2018 1:05:00 PM
Lyrical, romantic and beautiful, Charlie. Belayed congrats on POTD. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/27/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 3/18/2018 12:18:00 AM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 3/20/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Sheila...
Date: 3/16/2018 11:59:00 PM
'No difference where we are"" . So true if content in presence of one we are with! You have a tender spirit...enjoy reading old entries. bbn
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Date: 3/16/2018 11:59:00 PM
'No difference where we are"" . So true if content in presence of one we are with! You have a tender spirit...enjoy reading old entries. bbn
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Date: 3/20/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Barbara...
Date: 3/16/2018 7:39:00 AM
Excellent.... A fave Charlie;-)
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Date: 3/16/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Keith...
Date: 3/13/2018 9:19:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Charlie, congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 3/13/2018 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Jo...
Date: 3/12/2018 6:41:00 AM
this is beautiful indeed ... the very opening two lines are enchanting ... love it, Charlie ...
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Date: 3/12/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Probir...
Date: 3/11/2018 10:48:00 PM
I haven't been around as much, but this my friend is true poetry, loved this one!
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Date: 3/12/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Arthur...
Date: 3/11/2018 8:28:00 PM
Wonderful write..Very heart lifting..Thank you so much for sharing.. Derena(Harriet)
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:17:00 PM
Thank you Derena...
Date: 3/11/2018 2:31:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, image and amazing flow of imagery. It is a rewarding experience to re-discover a poet for all seasons.
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Ovidiu...
Date: 3/10/2018 8:45:00 AM
The first say I am wishing to say is the pic is awesome, You're a true poet I can't write like this i can only tell stories in rhyme very impresive on to your next one
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Date: 3/10/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Marc...
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