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Paper Dawn

Paper boats float on the breeze more fragile than rose petals, and lovelier in dawn’s light. Adorned with soft-colored sails, each one glides with handmade pride and the sweet breath of childhood unaware of their demise. Entered in Bite Size Poem #45 Contest

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Date: 5/19/2020 11:17:00 PM
This is so beautifully adorned with innocence. Congratulations on your top placement Rhonda :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/22/2020 12:07:00 AM
Thank you again, Aditi...you are very kind! xx Rhonda
Date: 5/19/2020 5:46:00 PM
congratulations Rhonda on your 1st place win...well deserved. This is wonderful
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/22/2020 12:06:00 AM
Thank you, David! xx Rhonda

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