Painted River

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Tonight I asked the sacred sky Reveal the truth before my eyes and there within its paint did lie amber sands of a river dry Once a proud and mighty flow were all the sands would ever know Oh sacred sky you clearly show Uncertainty is sure to grow

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/5/2021 6:04:00 PM

Dear Jeannie, a profound message for humanity lies at the heart of your exquisite rhythm and rhythm. Such beautiful poetic expression flows from your glorious pen. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/5/2021 10:44:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Such kind words

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/30/2021 8:43:00 PM

I like this Jeannie. Flows well too. Well done :)

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/30/2021 9:55:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, I’ve been finding inspiration to write again through photography. Very random but a lot of fun.

John Gondolf

Date: 11/8/2021 4:51:00 AM

Your simple rhyme causes me to ponder, Jeannie, there is so much uncertainty in the world around us today and in life in general. Perhaps we should all seek answers in the sky. John

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/14/2021 9:47:00 AM

Just as good a place as any I guess, thanks for the comment.