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Pain

I want you to train And train again Till at last You gain; I want you to complain In times Of pain, But remember Stay sane And gather up gain Your vital source Your grain; Such is my advice To you; Over and again Advice again and again Need I clearly explain In your mind In your brain Lie the solutions To the depths of your pain? No matter how severe The pain Stay calm And refrain From life’s problems From life’s chain.

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Date: 12/23/2023 3:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/9/2020 6:39:00 PM
Looking forward to more by you...check out the contests too. They’re a lot of fun, and are great challenges to try new forms.
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Date: 10/9/2020 11:02:00 PM
I like the rhyme and rhythm of this! It has good advice in it, too.
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Jillani Birech
Date: 10/10/2020 12:19:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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