Pacific Wrens

In foggy north coasts comes bright flecks from speckled calls~ of pacific wrens 8/13/21

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Date: 10/9/2021 9:01:00 AM

Wrens and sparrows do have some beautiful colors when seen up close like with binoculars. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Date: 9/25/2021 10:54:00 AM

I like it... Beautiful imagery here... Well penned

Date: 8/17/2021 9:44:00 PM

Written by one who knows the foggy north coast... I like the proximity of the words flecks and speckled. Beautifully crafted.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/18/2021 2:37:00 PM

That's exactly why I wrote them, clever catch :)

Date: 8/14/2021 6:47:00 AM

Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina

Date: 8/14/2021 2:12:00 AM

Oh wow! I love those "speckled calls", great haiku, Michelle:)

Date: 8/13/2021 1:40:00 PM

Makes me long for the coast so I can hear them! Good luck in the contest!

Date: 8/13/2021 1:29:00 PM

Not familiar with the Pacific Wren, but love to see any birds in flight. Do you live by the coast Michelle? Tom

Date: 8/13/2021 11:21:00 AM

Probably cooing, "Fire! Fire!" Good luck in the contest!