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If we could wish upon a star and see our wish come true the only thing we could wish for is what we cannot do. To bring our daughter back to us without her earthly pain for memories now are all we have since parting was such pain. I know there's other parents who have shared our darkest night but children shouldn't go first we should be their leading light. Although I speak the mysteries of the mind within the soul within our hearts we suffer from a huge big gaping hole. We strive for reassurance that at last we'll meet again but until then, like others, we just learn to live with pain. Ivor G Davies

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Date: 6/4/2016 9:16:00 PM
Fiction or not, the pain of losing a child, regardless of their age, is one of the most difficult things life can ask of anyone. I know many who live with the 'hole', it is a palatable grief that one's soul must make room for because it will be there for their life's duration. Well written and, need I say, touching. I'll lose it if I ponder this subject much longer so I'm running away now ... CayCay
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Ivor Davies
Date: 6/14/2016 7:28:00 AM
Sadly it's not fiction, thanks for your comments....Ivor
Date: 6/4/2016 5:33:00 PM
So sad, Ivor! Is this a recent loss? A wonderful write about a tragic subject. My heart goes out to you. Love, Kim
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Date: 6/14/2016 7:31:00 AM
Yes, still very recent only 21 years ago. Lesley would have been 46 by now but it still feels like yesterday..Ivor..

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