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Our Unconditional Love

My long denied dreams Met with realism when Your love superseded all the miseries of life Oh ! My lover artist Paint your love with Your divine kiss ; the purest eternal bliss You heel my heart With your gentle art ! I am your sweetest muse Our thirst for each other Makes us go crazy ! the two extreme world Cannot deprive us our love ! So we are born with a common fate an unconditional love against the time I wish to spend my life in your great strong arms Far from the country life Deep into the rustic charms !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/15/2016 10:46:00 AM
Unconditional love, expected to last a lifetime....that's how one feels when madly falling in love! You sounded so happy then, Smriti! We tend to forget then that love is like a rose...its beauty veils the thorns. ~ Been pondering on the final two lines...the similarity of country and rustic... hugs // paul
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:21:00 AM
wow! and i bet it felt good... sometimes one never knows how it feel to fall .. one is never for sure when a dream has been awaken.. sometimes love does not feels the way it should... it feels way better than expected,... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/27/2011 6:54:00 PM
Happiness has returned to your face :)
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Date: 5/28/2011 2:27:00 AM
I Will never let it go any where now !
Date: 5/27/2011 5:07:00 PM
Very passionate write.Pl check for typo in the 1st line of 2nd stanza.(heel ----it should be heal)........
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:54:00 PM
Smriti Beautiful just beautiful , wonderful words of love .Anne
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:03:00 PM
superceded heal too other than that it was beautiful
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