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Our Lovely Sky

With stars & moon, lovely sky glows in night, with marathon race of clouds, day is bright. From scarlet sky of morning sun grows best, sky turns golden red, when sun takes rest. Housing oxygen from trees, sky feels healthy. Housing countless clouds, sky is wealthy. The flight of a hungry eagle, looks like kite. Waving trees at mountain top, hugs sky tight. Birds fly happily chirping songs for the best, sky is their paradise and tree is their nest. After blasting crackers and showering nectar of rain, sky marries ocean wearing splendid rainbow of heaven. River sings nice after drinking heavenly juice, Lovely sky is our friend, invigorated our cruise. Air flows smooth making tide in water, air is son of the sky, rain is his daughter. Our flight flies better kissing rays of Sun, our serendipity is bright,made life fun. Don't try to pollute our blue bright ether, Please never forget, pollution is our killer.

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Date: 9/18/2016 8:09:00 AM
A wonderful read, if only the message was out there. This world is all we got,... Enjoyed reading this one all over again. Linda
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Date: 9/16/2016 10:42:00 PM
Manmath, your poem is astonishingly, brilliantly image-rich. I clung to every line. Thank you for composing it and sharing it. It's a treasure.
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Date: 9/11/2016 1:58:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive, Manmath, and so dependent on us to control pollution. As you rightly say. Well dome, Barry.
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Date: 9/9/2016 1:26:00 AM
An unbelievably crafted urge against pollution. Good one, Manmath.
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Date: 8/24/2016 5:35:00 PM
hope you are back with us soon Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2016 8:24:00 AM
- You are missed, my friend Manmath - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2016 5:05:00 AM
Where are you Manmath? You are very much missed! Blessings, Connie ; )
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:03:00 PM
Well thought out and nicely written Keep up the good work Blessings Edith
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Date: 7/18/2016 3:55:00 PM
a great poem that begs kindness for our precious air supply. WEll done, Manmath
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Date: 7/8/2016 2:02:00 AM
Hi Manmath, You have penned a beautiful write. With a meaningful message. The last two lines had my full attention"Don't try to pollute our blue bright ether,Please never forget, pollution is our killer".Well done. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/3/2016 10:13:00 PM
Manmath, hope you had a wonderful birthday. Stopping by to say hi... Luv. Linda
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Date: 7/8/2016 1:35:00 AM
Thank u very much.
Date: 6/1/2016 3:56:00 PM
Year! Great, great! Meaningful gem........A.M.
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Date: 5/27/2016 5:59:00 AM
Wonderful and meaningful writing my friend, Manmath! A seven!
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Date: 5/25/2016 10:10:00 AM
A beautiful set of couplets, Manmath.. the imagery is amazing... LINDA
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Date: 5/21/2016 4:37:00 AM
- Impressive ... a lovely place and beautiful poem - I wish you a lovely weekend, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/19/2016 4:27:00 PM
Sounds like paradise, hopefully not lost.
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Date: 5/19/2016 11:07:00 AM
beautiful imagery Manmath a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/18/2016 11:45:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:40:00 AM
Wonderful thoughts for us today, as you celebrate nature with your words. "After blasting crackers and showering nectar of rain, sky marries ocean wearing splendid rainbow of heaven." ... I think this was my favorite couplet of yours ... we often think of rainbows as an arch, but actually it's a ring that always goes around the Sun (perhaps he's the one wedding the ocean sky together) ....
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Date: 5/15/2016 2:08:00 PM
First I wanted to thank you for faving Ko'Olina. I believe I have you to thank for having it picked POTD. I truly appreciate your kindness. This lovely poem pays tribute to our glorious earth and ends with a plea to keep it clean. We must teach our children to be aware for they hold the earth in the palms of their hands. Lovely Manmath! # 7 ; )
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Date: 5/15/2016 11:09:00 AM
Very nice indeed... we have only one place to live...
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:29:00 AM
Very lovely Manmath...lovely indeed
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Date: 5/14/2016 11:56:00 PM
fantastique nice poem
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:08:00 PM
A lovely verbal painting of Earth's treasures, Manmath, and with a lesson at the end. Nicely written! 7, Sandra
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:55:00 AM
Nature at its most vibrant, luscious and colourful moments. Lovely images.
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