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Our Dalliance Has Ended

i shall never be able to forget our affection was deep as first love, and wild as all regret- crimson and medallion encompass my soul; ‘neath the autumn moon i still etch your silhouette sincerity arrived and remorse soon followed, for i needed compassion, someone to console- i put away my lace to replace what was before, now my poor essence shallow, my heart hollowed o’er the mount of forgiveness is where i wish to be, never saving a love that washes up a reverie shore- o, if only my sweet, we could make one more connection, maybe you would be you- and… i would be me i shall always be frail in ways never comprehended, must cease this pain so that i may be apprehended- our passion could have been incredibly splendid, all love suspended... as our dalliance has ended 2. Deep as first love, and wild as all regret - Alfred Lord Tennyson Date: 2.25.20

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Date: 3/22/2020 12:15:00 AM
Lu Loo, Sweet frailty's magic and dalliance found at an end. Such a wonderful imagining for the long night. -Richard
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Date: 2/28/2020 7:32:00 PM
wow, I agree with Edward here. You did a phenomenal job with this inspiring theme, Laura. Thanks so much for liking my young love poem. It was a meaningful one for me.
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Date: 2/28/2020 7:27:00 PM
Beautiful! You have done this contest justice, sweet poetess!
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Date: 2/28/2020 1:38:00 PM
Phenomenal poem we can all relate to, Luloo:-) I thoroughly enjoyed this. Seems like a winner to me!
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Date: 2/25/2020 1:47:00 PM
Laura, it is a testament to your writing skill that you have to tell that it's fiction:) Don't you think it's a bit ironic how we live to make memories and then people say, don't live in the past? Another fine write. Good luck!
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Date: 2/25/2020 12:42:00 PM
So sad, love lost. Well done LuLoo, best wishes in the contest...
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