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Optic Mystic

there is a bright side to the dark let your I adjust MagiCicada13

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Date: 12/22/2023 10:12:00 AM
How did I miss this one? Fav.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/27/2023 8:35:00 PM
I forgot this one! Thank you :)))
Date: 12/19/2018 11:37:00 PM
Very witty, Maureen. Love it.
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Date: 12/17/2018 10:44:00 AM
Cryptic script, Maureen, and says so much. Meditations are made of this stuff; deep.
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Date: 12/9/2018 4:54:00 PM
Beautiful allegorical approach. Wisdom most often dwells in the darkness of contemplation! Nice read. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/10/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Millard :) xomo
Date: 11/29/2018 9:54:00 AM
Nicely done!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thank you! :))) xomo
Date: 11/24/2018 10:16:00 PM
Aye, aye, Ma'am! Season's best, Gershon
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/25/2018 12:13:00 AM
Thank you Wolf Man, xomo
Date: 11/23/2018 9:09:00 AM
Being a third eye advocate, this one wows me.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/23/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so much! .:) xomo!
Date: 11/21/2018 12:50:00 PM
Another very clever one, Mo! (I need this reminder often!)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thank you! (me myself and I do too;) xomo <3
Date: 11/21/2018 12:33:00 PM
Definitely something "I" needed to hear today. Thank you so much for sharing this my friend.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:28:00 AM
Advice I need to heed myself these days ;) thank YOU <3 xomo
Date: 11/21/2018 11:37:00 AM
Marvelously profound dearest, Maureen ! A fav for me! Hugsxxx
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:28:00 AM
Honoured my friend! Thank you so much <3 xomo!
Date: 11/21/2018 7:49:00 AM
...love the wordplay......
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thank you John :) xomo!
Date: 11/21/2018 2:56:00 AM
i opening possibilities. one of the best Senryu poems i've read!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:26:00 AM
Wow! Honoured :))) thank you! xomo
Date: 11/21/2018 1:56:00 AM
Great advice Maureen told in a few words. Tom.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Tom :) xomo
Date: 11/21/2018 1:06:00 AM
sent you an email :)
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Date: 11/21/2018 1:05:00 AM
ah words of wisdom, even eye should follow!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:24:00 AM
The third eye sees the deepest ;)
Date: 11/21/2018 1:02:00 AM
I love this Maureen, so thought provoking and so few words - brilliant, a fav for me! Kindest thoughts Ann x
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Ann! :))) xomo <3
Date: 11/21/2018 12:26:00 AM
Brilliant in its enlightened focus, wisdom and brevity, not to mention one of the best puns I have ever heard. Very well done, Maureen
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:21:00 AM
Wow :)) thank you Geoffrey! xomo
Date: 11/20/2018 10:49:00 PM
Line 3 blows my mind...
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2018 7:19:00 AM
Delighted :) thank you! xomo