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Only Leaves

Only Leaves Their numbers are overwhelming golden and brown transversing my path. I abandon every one in each step forward. Green lives, lived,finally fallen to the battlefield of my morning walk, some burning red, the last fire extinguished. Others are dry and crisp, burnt toast of maples, drifting and rolling as Mariah scoots them. Is it the wind; or are these pointy little corpses positioning for Halloween tricks?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/22/2014 3:21:00 PM
Very nicely done, looking forward to reading more...
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/24/2014 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Julie. I wrote that one so long ago. Kathy
Date: 3/25/2013 5:17:00 PM
Hi Kathryn I love leaves and so a poem a descriptive as this has fed my soul this morning. Great to be with you on Poetry Soup. Be of good spirits, Love, SuZ
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Date: 12/14/2012 8:24:00 AM
I love the descriptiveness of the fallen leaves. And the playfulness of the last stanza. Great write.
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Date: 10/28/2012 6:14:00 PM
Simply beautiful.
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Date: 10/26/2012 11:43:00 AM
this is darling, how you ended it. I loved the images in this one about the different colors of fall leaves. Beautiful!
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Date: 10/25/2012 5:59:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem. I can imagine walking and seeing the abundance of leaves fallen in colors of autumn, and brown some all ready brown, crisp crunching underfoot. Halloween near. Thanks for sharing your poem.
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Date: 10/24/2012 9:59:00 AM
clever poem is this, kathryn, one imagines as one reads your poem, being there, inside of the poem, this is powerful writing...
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Date: 10/22/2012 10:38:00 AM
Your work facinates me.
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Date: 10/21/2012 10:39:00 AM
Beautiful description of ... autumn, perchance?... with a little 'seasonal treat' in the last 2 lines! Terry
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Date: 10/20/2012 7:44:00 PM
There is no one here with the facility of language that you have... none with imagery so vividly evoked. I think I've said it before of you... you are a unique. Love, Keith
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Date: 10/19/2012 11:17:00 AM
I love your imagination in writing this poem Kathryn!Very nice poem.Enjoyed the read.
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