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One Symptom of What Is Wrong.

Who needs parades or who gets the wing? We have no need for carols to sing. For what matters today is:" Get out of my way!" as Black Friday and bargains are king.

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Date: 12/5/2010 6:10:00 PM
Hello, Gerard! Stopping by real quick to ask you to put the word ~sandcastle~ on your contest entry.. I'm still in the middle of judging. Sorry! I just noticed it right now. And i so love your entry. Hopefully you get my notice before i close contest. God bless* SKAT
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:47:00 PM
lol, bargains are king, you bet, lol, sorry to hear about the shoves, excellent limerick:)
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Date: 11/29/2010 2:12:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win Gerard with this witty Limerick, in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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Date: 11/29/2010 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Gerard! Soup Mail. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 9:24:00 PM
That is about it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:19:00 PM
Good job, Gerard. YOu got it right!! And congratulations on your winning poem! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:10:00 PM
seems about right Gerard! Nailed it in very few words. Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on this win for the excellent entry to the contest, Gerard
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Date: 11/28/2010 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 10:09:00 AM
Get out of my way!" as Black Friday and bargains are king. "Yep, Wrong King, True Love is forgotten!" "Congratulations" on a worthy poem's recognition! Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:56:00 AM
You limericked it right out of the park with this one, Gerald. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 11/28/2010 7:06:00 AM
Excellent poem, Gerard! "Get out of my way" is being heard a lot during the Christmas rush. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:03:00 PM
Very humorous and witty write you have penned, Gerard
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Date: 11/21/2010 4:50:00 PM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Gerard! Love, Carolyn
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