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"one" Or the "other"

As ONE grows stronger the feelings are so devine, As the OTHER does the same your clock loses time... ONE feels great just as it should, the OTHER causes pain just as burning timbers of wood... ONE takes Faith and Understanding for one another, the OTHER takes control of your mind, body and soul and your heart it will smoother... ONE makes you smile and eager to share your life, the OTHER makes you frown and will cut you like a knife... ONE makes you happy and fulfills your every need, the OTHER will make you angry and cause your heart to bleed... ONE will make your life worth while and fill your every desire, the OTHER will make you miserable and set all your goals on fire... I would definitely choose ONE anytime over THE OTHER, cause ONE gives you hope and THE OTHER will cause you to lose a brother... ONE I have called 'LOVE' with it you will become someone, THE OTHER I called 'HATE' it will leave you all alone...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/2/2010 9:29:00 PM
How very true indeed and how inspirational to read this Sunday. Very well written. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 5/2/2010 3:19:00 PM
enjoyed, a good write
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Date: 5/2/2010 10:33:00 AM
Very unique! Loved it. good write.
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