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Like a thunderbolt through the heart, She was beauty, a work of art, A snowfield on a summer's day, She was an angel here to stay. Such loving eyes to gaze upon, How could I ever do her wrong, The moment of truth did come then, As I wrote with paper and pen. Was she truly the love for me? This is something that I must see, Plainly my love for her was torn, To walk in two worlds I was sworn. One of love the other duty, Neither shall wane but one must be. (Eight syllables per line)
12~7~2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/16/2017 10:44:00 AM
Just logged in and came across this little beauty -- lovely poem, White Wolf! Most impressed...really enjoyed this one. My best regards. :) john
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Date: 11/15/2017 12:48:00 PM
Lovely write, WW. Great imagery with a tragic twist. Kind regards, John.
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Date: 11/15/2017 2:09:00 AM
What a wonderful write white!. Kudos. Joshua.
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Date: 11/12/2017 7:34:00 PM
A beautiful heartfelt Sonnet WW with passionate imagery that I feel ended in heartbreak... Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 6/23/2017 8:53:00 PM
Well- done, White Wolf! Congrats on your win! Janice
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White Wolf
Date: 6/24/2017 12:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice! Enjoy your day my friend /|\
Date: 6/21/2017 3:18:00 AM
What a dilemma. Wonderfully written.
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Date: 6/21/2017 3:33:00 AM
Totally fictional of course! Haha! Thanks, Jean /|\
Date: 6/20/2017 10:58:00 PM
This is so beautifully written. It was a pleasure reading this poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/21/2017 1:49:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, my friend /|\
Date: 6/20/2017 9:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win WW
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Date: 6/20/2017 9:54:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph /|\
Date: 6/20/2017 6:58:00 PM
Congrats!!! Wolfie all the way round...fantastic job my friend...all the best mate...^WW^
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White Wolf
Date: 6/20/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thank you very much /|\
Date: 6/20/2017 5:40:00 PM
Great job!!Nice win!!!
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Date: 6/20/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Jeremy /|\
Date: 6/8/2017 9:30:00 AM
Nice rhyme and good images.
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Date: 6/8/2017 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Annette! Enjoy your day /|\
Date: 2/15/2017 5:44:00 PM
Nicely done
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Date: 2/10/2017 2:18:00 AM
well written
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Date: 2/6/2017 7:21:00 PM
Sonnet that flows naturally loaded with images. Well done, White Wolf.Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
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Date: 2/6/2017 5:41:00 PM
Engaging write. Makes me want to read what happened...
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Date: 1/5/2017 10:00:00 AM
BACK AGAIN TO READ THESE TOP CLASS VERSES. Closing verse sets the piece admirably. A7
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Date: 12/20/2016 1:17:00 AM
If you ever feel like it, we could do one together :)
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Date: 12/19/2016 11:46:00 PM
You placed in the contest, much congratulations :) And I still love the sonnet!
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White Wolf
Date: 12/20/2016 12:10:00 AM
Yeah, sonnets are my favourite, just wish I could do them justice! /|\
Date: 12/16/2016 8:45:00 PM
A 7 for your winning poem, Rick! Janice
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Date: 12/9/2016 10:57:00 PM
Lovely poem!!!!!!..... congrats on being selected.....
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White Wolf
Date: 12/10/2016 1:11:00 AM
Thank you /|\
Date: 12/9/2016 8:36:00 PM
Nice sonnet. My mind needed a rest from my own poetry so I decided to read a bit! Congrats and best of luck to you on your journey to find poetic justice through being whatsoever it may. Keep it real. Zink-
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:42:00 PM
With just a hint of fiction, I shall do my best! Thanks, Zink (Cool avatar) /|\
Date: 12/9/2016 5:46:00 PM
Hi Rick, Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/9/2016 5:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis /|\
Date: 12/9/2016 2:35:00 PM
So cute. ..so beautiful ...
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Date: 12/9/2016 2:38:00 PM
Thanks, Deborah /|\
Date: 12/9/2016 11:57:00 AM
Very good poem about conflict. If duty hurts another, wouldn't love go out the window?
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:04:00 PM
It did indeed! And thank you /|\
Date: 12/9/2016 9:59:00 AM
Very beautiful. Congrats Rick :)
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White Wolf
Date: 12/9/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, dear Akkina /|\
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