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One Heartbeat

I remember that it was an ordinary day When Life came and whispered low Said, I know that you've been searching And I'm gonna tell you where to go. Life's words fell on me like sweet honey Awed by her soothing touch of poetry Son, there's a voice calling you to echo Can you feel her tug to pair in melody There's a kind of music that last forever Seek that heartbeat.. perfect for you Only one girl made to match your echo In love.. one heartbeat comes from two Sweet girl, please be my one heartbeat! ~Lyric Man Note: My write is an echo to a poem "The Heatbeat Of Me" by an incredible writer here on the Soup, Brandy Nicole. Go check out her work.. you'll love it!

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Dr Virinchi Mudumbai Acharya

Date: 7/21/2018 8:13:00 PM

Heart touching beat of tge heart. Heartful.

Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 7/21/2018 3:26:00 AM

Lyric Man, such a heartwarming poem....

Charles Reese

Date: 7/15/2018 9:07:00 PM

There's a lot I like about this little poem but that last line is my favorite. It may even inspire a poem from me.

Mark Peterson

Date: 7/15/2018 12:22:00 AM

Each stanza entreated the reader to continue, and you do not disappoint. The word that kept repeating in my mind was tenderness and how you let it flow.

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/14/2018 12:53:00 PM

Your words speak with the power of life and love. Your mind set flows gently onto the page and we can relate with you and where your words lead us. A poem offering quiet reflection on the essence of being human and sharing the experience of love, intrinsic to our species. Emile.

Bob Taub

Date: 7/14/2018 11:45:00 AM

I find this piece a very nice write too.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/13/2018 2:50:00 PM

Just so magically romantic when two hearts beat as one! You're the real Lyric Man - some will imitate but they can't duplicate:-)! You just keep churning out these gems, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Frances Schiavina

Date: 7/13/2018 9:57:00 AM

Well said. Yes your poem is inspiring!

Sheikh Shadi Marjan

Date: 7/12/2018 12:14:00 PM

such a good poetry.. best wishes for you....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2018 8:13:00 AM

I will check it out. Have a great day, great day, day, day, d a y......

Mike Hauser

Date: 7/12/2018 7:19:00 AM

Fantastic!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/12/2018 3:31:00 AM

Beautiful... You are absolutely right. The most beautiful music is a synchronize heartbeats...

Ricky Muse

Date: 7/11/2018 8:22:00 PM

The line "Life came and whispered low" is intriguing. Is it synecdoche or personification? Let a debate rage on. Nice poem.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/11/2018 6:07:00 PM

Nicely done my friend. Beautifully worded. I know she is touched by this lovely tribute. Great job. God Bless, JB

Charles Messina

Date: 7/11/2018 5:41:00 PM

The music goes on for sure...It just has a different song sometimes...like mine, 3 times LOL Beautiful write Lyric Man!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/11/2018 5:25:00 PM

The end leaves me breathless. It is that last thought that truly melts me. The heart-beats of me, you can feel. Two hearts are beating as one, around these words. Which is very romantic and how love should always be. This is beautiful in every way. Thank you. I am still in awe. ~ Brandy