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One Day

They have written of the sky as the “star-torn blanket of the night” and of the moon as a white communion wafer as the Buddhist female to be covered by the sun but when I looked the light moon had a torn-pink-paper edge the sky was a clear blue dome over and wrapped all around for once I might have centred in my own universe but it was another cause the girl died soon after

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Date: 10/27/2016 10:44:00 AM
Good going Susan...pd
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Susan Baquie
Date: 10/28/2016 5:48:00 PM
thank you
Date: 10/27/2016 7:54:00 AM
This was very deep and intriguing. Nicely done.
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Susan Baquie
Date: 10/28/2016 5:48:00 PM
thank you

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