One Day

I love you, I miss you But what can I do? I just keep on a praying And thinking of you One day I hope I'll be back with you Until then, all I can do Is go Boo Hoo. Hold all your remarks Until them I can view That will mean You're stuck with me And you're the ones who'll go Boo Hoo God Bless till then, Cile

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Elaine George

Date: 1/7/2010 6:20:00 PM

Hope all is well with you, dear Cile. Thinking of you and missing you. Love, Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/4/2010 9:15:00 AM

Perk up it will be Spring soon! Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/29/2009 5:26:00 PM

nicely written, who boo?

Adell Foster

Date: 10/4/2009 5:41:00 AM

Hi there Cile, I enjoyed the smooth flowing imagery of the read. Thank you for sharing :-)God Bless, Always, Adell

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/15/2009 6:05:00 AM

Dearest Cile,where are you and your wonderful poetry? Miss you here at the Soup. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/30/2009 4:12:00 PM

missing you for so very long already. john loving iii

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/12/2009 11:18:00 AM

I call this prose poetry, great imagery of juvenile heartbreak

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/6/2009 5:32:00 AM

Poignant words Marycile, it's a difficult pain to undergo...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 2/9/2009 2:43:00 PM

You just boo hoo all you need to ... smile ... time will bless us all with new buds and warmer days until its our time to pass into another form of mystery ...

Date: 1/18/2009 1:42:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. I've missed you too and your gift of humor. Glad to be stuck with you. You certainly are a day brightener. Blessings to you. Karen

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/16/2009 4:29:00 PM

hey stranger. cought you on the net Boo Hoo. love you too we were missing you. God bless you too. john