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Cherished lovers ... only in a magical mesmerizing moment coloring passion remembered. Passion ... someone's perfume perhaps or, a desire for chocolate fudged to ebony. Sweethearts embrace held in pre-alzheimer snapses ... cuddling. Such a pity, or perhaps ... a blessing? Why swoon or sway in the silence? Just rest in a sweetness of simmered leftovers embracing this soul that knows mountaintop peaks, starbursts of ectasy forever and always.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/21/2010 6:04:00 PM
A beauty of a write have your self a good one, also thanks for your comments.
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Date: 4/7/2010 7:35:00 AM
Wow Sue, such passion in the area of love and romance! You are beautiful Sue and you express your feeling with such grace. Keep writing dear lady. :)
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Date: 4/5/2010 10:05:00 AM
Awesome expression put to pen Sue. Sometime just the way it is on this side of life. Awesome write. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:17:00 PM
Another very good poem, Sue!! Bittersweet. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:58:00 AM
The romance is alive and well in your soul, Sue! This is lovely!!! nicely done! love, Carrie
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Date: 3/30/2010 7:44:00 PM
When Alzheimer's takes someone's present awareness away, we cling to the memories of "simmered leftovers," those "starbursts of ecstasy" that made them so beloved to us. Such a sad but beautifully penned poem, Sue! Love, Carolyn
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