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Once Upon a Wish or Two

haiku #1 A Man's Wish I am only man wishing to connect with God but I am just man haiku #2 God's Wish Yes, you are a man wishing to connect with ME DO NOT HESITATE

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Crystol Woods

Date: 5/23/2024 12:59:00 PM

LOVE! XO

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/22/2024 8:37:00 PM

Option A: man is but a beast // howling for heavenly help // clothed as holy priest... Thanks for the 'food for thought,' Benjamin. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2024 1:15:00 PM

Very well said. I would think God would love this one! Blessings, Benjamin!

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/20/2024 1:38:00 PM

Thank you.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/19/2024 4:45:00 PM

I sincerely liked these two Haikus. Reading gives me perspective. Perhaps we all would do well by putting ourselves in God's shoes once in a while. Nicely done. Have a great evening, Sara

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/20/2024 1:39:00 PM

Not an easy task for sure. Thanks for your reply.