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" HOPE " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of nature, body of water and sky

Once upon a time, Hope, a featherless bird was, Which For to escape from despair's land, Its very own wings did grow And Onto the place of dreams and Expectations, swiftly, flew. Since then, Each time one of us feels blue, Hope flies near him And on its aspiring wings of Optimism and cheerfulness, Carries him far from the gloomy Ground! © Demetrios Trifiatis 13 December 2022

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Sotto Poet

Date: 12/13/2022 6:26:00 PM

Dear friend Demetrios, At different focuses in our lives, each of us searches for the "winged promise." Trust is the one thing that we must stand up to the allurement to give up on.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/14/2022 1:31:00 AM

My dearest friend, Lasaad. The title of the poem says it all! Thank you so much. Be blessed!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/13/2022 10:18:00 AM

The one thing we should never give up on Demetrios, hope. We all look for those wings of hope in our lives sometimes. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/13/2022 10:31:00 AM

Thank you for visiting and commenting, dearest Tom. Be blessed.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/13/2022 5:29:00 AM

Inspiring, uplifting poem my friend. Hope makes it possible.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/13/2022 7:29:00 AM

Thank you for your precious comment, my dearest friend, Vijay. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/13/2022 2:12:00 AM

- In our world we need " aspiring wings of Optimism and cheerfulness" ... love it - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/13/2022 3:51:00 AM

Indeed, we need, dearest Anne-Lise. Thank you for your precious visit and comment. Be blessed. Hugs xxx