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~ Once upon a long ago... Three kids were raised on my family's farm I am the middle child who spent more time working in the fields with Dad, my Galahad, for I found household chores such a bore. Outside, in the fresh air, me and mon pere worked side by side, talking about the future. We pruned row after row of tomato plants, fed chickens that were later killed, one by one but when their blood was spilled, I was sick Not a bite of them could I take while my heart ached for the baby chicks I had raised. To this day, I don't eat a lot of eggs. How many times did I fall from the hay loft... Quite oft, and from the swing in the tree Another treasured childhood memory. Beneath it I cried and then dried my tears, overcoming fears, and through the years, Dad kept replacing the rope swing in the tree, of the barnyard meadow, just for me. The tree's still there on my family's land I painted it last Autumn when I visited the farm. The fields are no longer tended and plowed Rows are fallow on what was once hallowed ground to me. There are no kids playing there no longer a rope swing. Everything is changed, rearranged to suit the needs of the new owners who kindly understood when I asked if I could paint the old rusty-roofed barn of my childhood where I once rode my horse, and of course played hide and seek with my sister and brother, once upon a long ago ~

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Date: 2/5/2024 4:24:00 PM
Sounds like a smashing childhood, Lin. This is lovely write with a lovely accompanying image. Well done on both counts.
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Date: 2/7/2024 4:55:00 AM
Hi, Terry and thanks for your kind compliments on my poem and painting.
Date: 2/2/2024 4:44:00 AM
Very beautiful read! Thank for sharing this poem :-) Have a very nice day ~AA
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Date: 2/3/2024 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much for your thoughts, ~AA.
Date: 2/1/2024 6:42:00 PM
Entered into this poem, Lin, and didn't want to come out... you have put together such an exquisite reel of reminiscences, all full of life. A pleasure to be there...thanks for inviting me...
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Date: 2/3/2024 8:50:00 AM
You're always welcome to come along, Paul. Thank you for having the ability to SEE what I express in words.
Date: 2/1/2024 5:35:00 PM
Dear Lin, This beautifully reminisces about childhood days on the family farm, where each memory is etched with love and nostalgia. Your connection to the land and the moments shared with your father touch my soul. It's like flipping through an album of cherished moments. I grew up on a farm. Wonderful memories and amazing artist to boot! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/3/2024 8:46:00 AM
Childhood days... live was good and simple. Thanks for the compliments, Daniel.
Date: 2/1/2024 3:52:00 PM
A heart touching poem of once upon a long ago ~ Very nostalgic for me, my dad grew up on a farm, and I spent summer picking cotton and digging up johnson grass. I spent hours shooting baskets at the hoop hung on the side of the barn. A lovely painted, Lin. I've always wanted to paint but would never give up my time to do it justice. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 2/3/2024 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Bill. You know the ways of farm life. Johnson grass is a pain to get rid of and it grows so quickly. I started painting on a dare... I dabble in it, but it refocuses the mind on what we're doing instead stressful things. Get some canvas, brushes and acrylics.. Just go for it. Look at a picture and paint it your way... you may be surprised at the results.
Date: 2/1/2024 2:31:00 PM
ahhh...what a lovely poem and equally lovely painting...is this the one you told me about?? Anyway, I enjoyed the reminiscent feel of your words as well as the bittersweet feeling of the last few lines. Loved the title "Once Upon a Long Ago." It was perfect! Thanks for sharing. Am faving 'cause I like it! Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 2/1/2024 2:53:00 PM
Yes, Sara. This is the one I mentioned to you... one of the first I dared to paint. I changed the title from the obvious cliche, to this one, so I'm delighted you approve. Thank you.
Date: 2/1/2024 1:48:00 PM
What a lovely, and poignant, reminiscence , Lin. Your storytelling ability just shines and your painting gracefully articulates your childhood barn. You are so talented! Thank you for gifting us with your talents. Truly joyful! Blessings and gratitude to you for bringing back my childhood summers in the blackberry patch!
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Date: 2/1/2024 2:50:00 PM
Hi Sam and thank you for the many kind thoughts you offer my poetry, and now my brushes. Reminiscing the good times of our childhood brings a smile to me,too. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Those wild blackberries were so sweet!
Date: 2/1/2024 10:12:00 AM
Nice memories of past, which is hard to forget. Great poem. Love the painting.
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Date: 2/1/2024 10:26:00 AM
Thank you on both counts, Jay.

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