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ONCE AN A small slithering Snake sneaking Poison bites on prey AWAYS AN ASP May 5, 2018 Asp Contest by Anthony Slausen N/A

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John Gondolf

Date: 5/6/2018 8:23:00 AM

Very clever, Susan, nicely done. John

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/6/2018 6:40:00 PM

Thanks, John.

Roy Pett

Date: 5/5/2018 5:23:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant Susan, so clever, put a smile on my old face thank you. :))

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 1:19:00 PM

Thank you! Now that makes me smile. :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/4/2018 9:05:00 AM

I had to look because I got nothing in me creative-wise for all slimy life and ended up with my first morning laugh about asps of all things! So clever and amusing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/4/2018 2:48:00 PM

Lol. I had nothing either. I doubt it will make any list of winners but is good for a smile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2018 11:41:00 PM

Now that is MY kinda poem!!

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/4/2018 1:51:00 AM

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/3/2018 2:24:00 PM

Can't get any more succinct than this one!

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/3/2018 4:40:00 PM

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/3/2018 10:08:00 AM

Wonderful ... Innovative ... Sharp ...

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/3/2018 10:31:00 AM

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/3/2018 8:47:00 AM

short but to the point,

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/3/2018 9:43:00 AM

Lol. I could not come up with anything else.