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On This Lover's Day

he strung his heart upon a cloud for all the world to see he stole my heart, broke it twice then gave it back to me all these pieces raining down gathered on the lawn sit along a lonely path on this misty dawn my eyes now cry in crimson hues my heart it sings of somber blues and on this night my favorite day my words now know not what to say for silence speaks then echoes back as this day fades against the black (I am fine... just musing)

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/15/2021 1:30:00 AM

my eyes now cry in crimson hues my heart it sings of somber blues Wow! Beautiful! Congratulations on your win!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/15/2021 1:29:00 AM

my eyes now cry in crimson hues my heart it sings of somber blues Wow! Beautiful! Congratulations on your win!

John Watt

Date: 2/19/2020 12:20:00 AM

Sandra, I think this would make a good Country song - do you play guitar? I love the color contrast of crimson hues / somber blues. A lovely, mournful, sad write. I know your muse takes you that direction often, but nice to know you're doing fine - well done. Hugs ~ John

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/19/2020 5:01:00 AM

I don’t play guitar but so listen to country music often :).thank you for your kind words:.. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/18/2020 5:34:00 PM

Hello Sandra Adams, as i read this poem I saw a scene of two lovers together being romantic. Have a nice day my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/18/2020 7:21:00 PM

thank you so much Darlene... have a wonderful evening :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/18/2020 11:37:00 AM

I smiled from the beginning to the end. Your heartfelt poem ringing with pure truth, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/18/2020 7:20:00 PM

Thank you...I had fun writing it :) hugs

Quoth Theraven

Date: 2/17/2020 10:06:00 AM

Sandra, That is some fine musing on such a lover's day. Bittersweet for the heart that bears an unrequited passion. But I always preferred one bright candle to the glaring of the Sun. -Richard

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/18/2020 5:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Richard. :) hugs

Alkas Poetry

Date: 2/16/2020 12:04:00 PM

Splendid poem you wrote... life cpuld be easier if things were perfectly understood salute alkas

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/16/2020 4:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Alkas… hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2020 8:55:00 AM

... lol ... we forgot about it ... too much to do ... soon move into new house ... a great write, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/16/2020 4:55:00 PM

lol... always best to forget some things and move on... thank you ...and hugs :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/16/2020 7:34:00 AM

Like the rain must fall, my eyes now cry, just one of so many,many wonderful lines Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/16/2020 4:55:00 PM

Thank you so very much Harry... the first line haunted my muse, the rest just kind of fell after I started writing... hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/15/2020 9:55:00 PM

Your 'just musing' has resulted in a real big FAVE for me, Sandra. Wow! I really like this one. Keep on musing, as they say. Warm wishes from cold Chicago! :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/16/2020 4:54:00 PM

wow... thank you Gershon...I am honored... it was warm enough I left the house without my jacket and barely missed it.... hugs

Sanjay Karmakar

Date: 2/15/2020 11:07:00 AM

Nice song of love in moan. Wonderful write. Wishing all the best. Regards. sk.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/16/2020 4:52:00 PM

thank you Sanjay :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/15/2020 7:25:00 AM

Many feel this way on a day others celebrate--you gave them voice. Excellent write, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/15/2020 8:00:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay...you know my muse and her sad writes... she loves to go to that side... hugs

Silent One

Date: 2/15/2020 6:53:00 AM

i dont like valentine day either.. so im glad to see you post a sad one lol... silence can say so much... guess there are many who are lonely on this day and have reminders of heartache...

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/15/2020 7:59:00 AM

lol...my muse loves her sad writes....I am sure some really hate this day and can't wait for it to be gone... it was always one of my favorite holidays but many others hated it... it doesn't effect me either way anymore, just another day... hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/15/2020 5:41:00 AM

Sadly for many, they can't wait for the day to be over. I entered a poem my only valentine in Brians contest N, to try and show the darker side of valentines day. Hope you had a lovely day Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/15/2020 7:58:00 AM

I will have to see if I can find it... this has always been my favorite holiday but I know many hate it because their hearts of filled with pain and emptiness... hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/15/2020 3:38:00 AM

The worst nightmare for the heart is when it expects the best to happen but the worst prevails! Very powerful writing! Fortunately here it represents a fictitious situation but alas so many times is true dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/15/2020 7:56:00 AM

so true Demetrios... many have broken hearts and this day is painful for them... hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/15/2020 12:13:00 AM

A lovely romantic take that went wrong sadly Sandy, so glad it wasn't your experience but great rhyme and flow displayed here. Hugs and blessings,Gordon

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/15/2020 7:55:00 AM

Thank you Gordon....I don't know why it decided to fall in rhyme but that's just my muse sometimes.... hugs

Sheri Evans

Date: 2/14/2020 10:23:00 PM

Also glad you noted that it wasn't about you, at least not in the present as it seemed to me drawn from past truth. Well done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/15/2020 7:54:00 AM

I think most people have had at least one broken heart in their life...the first line was haunting my muse and I just let the words fall... thanks for reading and commenting :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/14/2020 6:55:00 PM

You write both rhyme and free verse equally well Sandra. This is really a beautiful yet sad piece that I enjoyed immensely. Happy Valentine's Day! xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/14/2020 7:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie...it was very cloudy here and as I was driving the clouds kept looking like hearts as they rolled by...I couldn't take pictures while driving but my muse started singing that first line, the rest just kind of came... Happy Valentine's Day to you XoXo

Chris Green

Date: 2/14/2020 5:20:00 PM

Phew, thank you for your note at the bottom. This was sad but your rhymes and meter were perfect. I loved everything about this, even the sadness...sort of. : )

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/14/2020 5:22:00 PM

lol...it was just one of those days where everything seemed to go wrong... the day started out beautifully and exciting then it all went down hill... I am good though... thank you Chris, I don't know why my muse chose rhyme but it was haunting me... hugs