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On the Other Side of the Mountain

See the car parks with their shiny new cars next to the sparkling new sports arena. and the smiling children, excited about the game to be seen. See the lovely girls with their perfect faces near the skyscraper buildings that pierce the sky. And how much people pay for something to eat, in the expensive restaurants always so full. Look at the beautiful shops full of wonderful clothes and the children enjoying life down on the beach. But on the other side of the mountain a smile is hard to find, as people try to survive life in a shanty town. Children are wandering alone in the streets sometimes with nothing on their feet. With sores that never heal and hair that's never clean. Abandoned and hoping to be pitied by the old lady who takes in children on the other side of town. Life is very different on the other side of the mountain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/29/2010 7:14:00 AM
Great view of life separated by a mountain! Good job Tim
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:31:00 AM
I like the view u post from both sides of the mountain. I know what side I want to visit. Enjoyed..
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:22:00 AM
hopeful poem, thanks for sharing.
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