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On That Long Train Ahead

On that long train ahead On that long train ahead, I am always the caboose. The long train ahead reaches, out into infinity’s heaven. The Holy Spirit often like an engineer, guiding its destination. The locomotive makes the most noise, gets credit for the job well done. The cars in the middle so coupled, mingle with one another so tracked. The caboose at the end of the train coasting forward, knowing no ending. On that long train ahead the caboose not seen will be there, the conductors “All aboard” knows. John H. Hardison..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/30/2016 1:27:00 AM
The Caboose may be last in line, and its function can never truly be defined. Every Caboose is unique and one-of-a-kind, and with the Holy Ghost the Caboose will never be left behind. I've read through quite a bit of your poetry you have a good heart and a good talent speak from your heart always remember you'll never be left behind. And that is a reason to smile.
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John Hardison
Date: 7/30/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thank Much for your kind comments and encouragement. The caboose is far ahead as it looks behind. Have new Poem but New Windows 10 is giving fits. Will seek help. Peace, Love and Joy
Date: 1/11/2015 10:36:00 PM
Thank you for the reply...PD
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Date: 1/10/2015 9:32:00 PM
John,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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John Hardison
Date: 1/11/2015 10:29:00 PM
Thanks Much lot the welcome. Much impressed by Poerty Soup. Aready found Favorites. Sure there will be many more. Contest, well if I win, I have to it again. Such habits. Addictive.Thanks again!
Date: 1/7/2015 1:27:00 AM
Perhaps most don't care about our life's journey, and still what matters is that we know where to stop and go. This is full of emotion.
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John Hardison
Date: 1/8/2015 7:05:00 AM
Thanks Much. Means a lot.
Date: 1/6/2015 8:56:00 PM
Hopefully our journey through life will be a log and happy one - lovely spiritual write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Hardison
Date: 1/8/2015 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Much for you comments. Means a lot in lifes journey

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