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Quietus Form of Unseeking Seeker in two stanzas

Just close your eyes and be at rest. Think not of things to do or times that you were not your best. Relax and you will find awareness in your mind. That is your prize! Just close your eyes. Give it a try; drift into peace. Think not of gloom and doom. Those kinds of thoughts you must release. Let tranquilness find room. Better you will feel, when you’re being real. That is the ideal. Kiss frets goodbye. Give it a try. Dec. 10, 2022 for 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE no 54' Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/12/2022 2:51:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Just to get the mind cleared is not so easy. It does help a person relax though. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/11/2022 8:45:00 PM
This will definitely work ! Serenity will come to you to nest inside ! Beautifully expressed thoughts, Andrea !
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Date: 12/11/2022 7:25:00 PM
Great way to slip into a lucid dream with body resting and presence awake.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/11/2022 8:25:00 PM
yeah, I changed the title to what I think it really was about because i do not understand the other title I used!! I doubt I will fare any better with this in Brian's contest. haha
Date: 12/11/2022 12:12:00 PM
Last night I spent the whole night awake. Hope I'll get some rest this night.
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Date: 12/11/2022 11:11:00 AM
Somnambulistically yours: Snore
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