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On Easter Morn

In quietude of early dawn she stood on Easter Day, where rested now her dearest son too early passed away. As light’s first rays peeled shadows from the grave’s cold marbled stone, she leaned and whispered into wind her words of sorrow sown. “I’ll never see his face again!” she cried to wind and God. “Why you, my son?” With stifled sob she fell to grassy sod. And then resplendent in the east, as if to give reply, the sunrise broke and seemed to loose the truth from crimson sky. Though blind she’d been, she now could see. As earth was bathed in red, it dawned on her that Easter morn how Christ for all had bled. Our worldly time is very short; immortal all shall be. The Comforter assured her this; her son again she’d see. For Brian Strand's 'YOUR CHOICE (2),any form,any theme' Poetry Contest Contest Details Written for a dear friend, who lost her son when he was still a fairly young man

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Date: 6/8/2019 8:07:00 PM
Oh, your poem is so beautifully poignant and inspiring, Andrea. You had me entranced throughout. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/6/2019 12:07:00 PM
I missed this lovely tribute to your friend's loss Andrea. So glad you reposted it for this contest. Congratulations on your top win! : ) xxoo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/6/2019 8:11:00 PM
Connie, it was for Floria!! I wonder if I ever posted it at PFt. It would be like 15 years ago!
Date: 4/14/2012 9:28:00 PM
Hmmm...I am going to read it!
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Date: 4/10/2012 6:52:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Easter Inspiration" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 8:56:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, Andrea. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Have a blessed Easter.
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Date: 4/6/2012 12:22:00 PM
Andrea congrats on your great win, have a lovely Easter..David
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Date: 4/6/2012 2:07:00 AM
Congratulations Gail, a Andrea piece xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 2:09:00 AM
Sorry sorry Andy the brandy got in the way, I was just being told a joke that was very funny .xx
Date: 4/5/2012 5:57:00 PM
A great poem from Mary's viewpoint. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/5/2012 5:21:00 PM
congrats Andrea on sweet success for this magnificent entry luv.. appreciate constant support always too..
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:54:00 AM
I want to wish you and your family a very HAPPY EASTER. Pass my congrats on to the new parents. love phyl
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Date: 4/1/2012 3:35:00 PM
You are a poet's poet. This is wonderfully lovely. This almost seems like it wrote itself. It truly is a God send.
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Date: 4/1/2012 10:03:00 AM
WoW Andrea! What a truly excellent piece. So few ever give a thought to Mary's pain at seeing her wonderful son die. GREAT JOB! God Bless and Happy Easter, JB
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Date: 4/1/2012 12:15:00 AM
A write that will touch chords in many hearts Here Andrea..) and holds out reflection of true redemption and hope to all..!
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Date: 3/31/2012 9:03:00 AM
Simply beautiful and brought tears to my eyes. Going to one of my fav. love phyl
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Date: 3/29/2012 10:15:00 PM
Andrea,dear, this is beautiful! How you have touched the heart... very best wishes in the contest my friend...Never stop Believing!!...much love,deb
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Date: 3/29/2012 9:04:00 PM
it is surely inspiring. wishing you a happy one Andrea and good luck on the contest. For all this time, thank you so much dear poet ^.~
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Date: 3/29/2012 6:32:00 PM
their are myths and ledgends about a lot of other people that don't include us. but easter morning all of us entered the story. lost but then found; blind but now we see.
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Date: 3/29/2012 3:05:00 PM
heartfelt read, andie... love how you phrased this beauruful story... been out of town and had a battery of med checks.. grreat easter renewal!.. lotsa luck and hugggs!..:) you okay??
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Date: 3/29/2012 9:55:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my contest Andrea.. good luck luv as am sure these words will fill my heart and soul with peace .. always enjoy ..luv..
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Date: 3/29/2012 5:18:00 AM
Andrea I know you can do it....David
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Date: 3/28/2012 7:23:00 PM
you really drew me into this right from the beginning. I could feel her ache, and then that ray of hope, burden eased...nicely done :)
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Date: 3/28/2012 2:16:00 PM
wow. wow. wow. what a beautiful sad piece with a reminder of Gods great blessings, here and after. i sometimes wonder of death and life are not the same coin, but different sides, related yet so different, always together in our hands and in our hearts... thank you for the sweet words, chuck
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Date: 3/28/2012 1:29:00 PM
beautiful but sad piece, my friend. Hope you had a wonderful time with your family
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Date: 3/28/2012 11:56:00 AM
Outstanding! If this doesn't win I will be surprised. Love, daver
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Date: 3/28/2012 11:40:00 AM
What a very touching and uplifting write this is, Andrea! I really like the message of hope you give here-- I think this is such a beautiful Easter right, rich with images, Really like this one! Gosh, my connection is really irritating today. I think I have to say goodbye for now... hugs to you sweetie pie :)
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