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Old Leaves

If magic in the leaves could speak, On gusty mid-fall days, at peak. While colors swirl and twirl about; If leaves could only shout words out. “Come quickly here and watch our show; The last we’ll do before the snow. The last we’ll give in crimson dress; Come here and see we’re at our best.” And as we watch them do this feat, The hand of God is poised to sweep, The merry, trembling, foolish leaves, From all the steadfast, somber trees. He gives them beauty far surpassed, This special time, their first and last. For on the morrow they will lie In barren wood, left there to die. Their colors gone and in that space, Shades of dismal brown replace. All crispness in their texture slain, By soggy nights and chilling rain. From this time forth their doomed to lie Beneath the ever changing sky. Till winters, springs and summers pass, And they meld with the earth at last. Then feed the soil from whence life springs, The sapling, fern and all green things. They've done their work and did it well; They shaded first, then danced and fell. Lets now think on of springs to come, As young green leaves revere the sun. Salute those old leaves, drum and fife, For they helped bring new leaves to life 09/16/2016

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Date: 9/19/2016 12:54:00 PM
Wonderful rhyme, a picture so awesome of leaf story...Congrats :)
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Date: 9/19/2016 2:15:00 AM
many congrats on your win Diane:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2016 10:41:00 PM
Diane, congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:18:00 PM
I like how you close the circle with the rebirth of the new leaves. Congrats, Diane. Agnes
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:41:00 PM
A wonderful sunset walk through the cycles of leaf-dom. Really enjoyed this one, the rhymes and the rhythmic cadence drifted through the trees as easily as the leaves. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:32:00 PM
Congratulations Diane on the placement of the contest
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:32:00 PM
Beautiful, Diane! Congrats!
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