Get Your Premium Membership

Old Friend

You are a mystery to me so rigid, confining yet setting me free- so sure of yourself but wholly without arrogance holding your ground no matter the circumstance stubbornly constant yourself unchanging I find my life you're incessantly rearranging Yet your radiant beauty is splendid and fine you need no dressing up for you are naturally sublime and you daily achieve what I can only aspire guiding, inspiring others higher and higher Your standards are demanding attention commanding you're unwavering worth savoring and constantly expanding my hopes, my fears my understanding And although, at times you wound me deeply and sometimes I treat you cheaply- I feel that perhaps you're the only friend who will be here 'til the end my oldest friend from earliest youth my rock, my counselor my teacher- Truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/2/2018 6:45:00 PM
Maybe I got it wrong but for me, this was a personification . Not a real person but truth itself is your old friend. Hope I got that right. magnificent poetry.
Login to Reply
Mcferran Avatar
Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/2/2018 6:50:00 PM
Yes!! You got it exactly right! That was what I was trying to do, I just thought it would be more interesting to only make it clear at the end... Thank you for the lovely compliment! ;)
Date: 11/2/2018 2:48:00 PM
The most amazing compliment we could ever give someone is to let them know that they exude truth; the best friend of all, and the most amazing friends are not afraid to share this. Well done, Rhona. Smart thinking!
Login to Reply
Mcferran Avatar
Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/2/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! One of the things I love most about your poetry is that it exudes, glows, dances, whispers, (and even occasionally shouts) with the truth! ;)
Date: 11/2/2018 11:22:00 AM
This was really nice. I like the format and especially like the theme. You are lucky to have a friend as good as this.
Login to Reply
Mcferran Avatar
Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/2/2018 3:23:00 PM
Thank you!! I am glad you enjoyed it! ;)
Date: 11/2/2018 10:39:00 AM
Wow!...superbly rendered Rhona...enjoyed your lovely write my friend...love & light...^WW^
Login to Reply
Mcferran Avatar
Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/2/2018 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, my winged friend! ;)

Book: Shattered Sighs